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Saturday, September 6, 2025

“Are You Simplifying with “NonCount” Nouns?



A New Name to Make Communication Easier? 

By your editing blogger, Carolyn Howard-Johnson,
book and marketing consultant, writer and, 
when my life needs a dose of joy, a poet, too!

The title of his “Vocabulary Habit” puzzles you, well, that’s why it’s here. One of my frequent vocabulary builders that comes to my mailbox unbidden maybe once a day (Word Smart) told me that they about “noncount nouns.” Well, do tell. Yep, there are all kinds of easy endings for most nouns. “-es,”, just plain -s,” and some  harder ones “-ies” for words like “babies” that can be counted. Some nouns  like “man” are loners and require have their own needs that must be followed (just like “men!”) Ya just gotta know. (That’s where a good teach or model comes in handy!) 

Some belong to categories like “games.” We hardly notice them because they need no change. “Hockey.” “Chess.” “Baseball” become something else if we try to make it a plural with an Sand somehow we just know it!

But what if we tutor English as a second language, teach, happened to be an immigrant or a second generation speaker of two or more languages. (Lucky them!)

We also know there are a few things that can’t be counted; they don’t tend to give most of us or our associates much trouble. Some are loners that obey the rules the “e” and “es” type rules and some belong to categories like “games.” We won’t find plurals available for “hockey” or “chess.” The students we tutor might barely notice., either. Yep, they are noncount nouns. 

Some give us trouble and when it comes time to discuss explain, it helps to have the vocabulary to help with that, a term that helps delineate them all because we’ll need to tell them about the helper word  that with our fellow writers, our students, our clients, it’s kind of nice to be equipped with a word that deliniates them. When we find nouns we know can be counted we go to words like "enough,"  "some," "any," “much,” "plenty of," and "no." 

But even they can be tricky. Word Smart gives us this example:


"’There aren’t many coffee left,’ since "coffee" is a noncount noun. (You might order ‘three coffees,’ but that’s actually an abbreviated form of ‘cups of coffee’ as "cups" can be counted.) The informal modifier ‘a little bit of’ also should be used only with noncount nouns, as in, "We got a little bit of rain today.’


And, that fellow writers, is why it helps to have a simple, straightforward word to describe them as we explain our crazy home-grown language to them. Hooray for “noncount.” 


PS: You’ll also want to touch on group words like when the infamous “goose” becomes “gaggle” of “geese.” You’ll find a list of them on “Google” and, yes, that might present a problem of its own. Ahem! 


Careers that arnot fed diareadily

                                                     aany living organism given no 
                                                              sustenance. ~ CHJ


MORE ABOUT THE BLOGGER and EDITOR




 Carolyn Howard-Johnson is the author of fiction, creative nonfiction, and poetry. She is also a marketing consultant, editor, and author of the multi award-winning HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers including the award-winning second edition of "The Frugal Book Promoter" and "The Frugal Editor." Her "How to Get Great Book Reviews Frugally and Ethically" will soon be published by Modern History Press in its second edition. Learn more on her Amazon profile page, http://bit.ly/CarolynsAmznProfile. "Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers" is one of her booklets--perfect for inexpensive gift giving--and "The Great First Impression Book Proposal, another booklet, helps writers who want to be traditionally published.” 

 Carolyn has three FRUGAL books for retailers including one she encourages authors to read because it will help them convince retailers to host their workshops, presentations, and signings. The first in that series is "A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques.” 

Carolyn helps writers extend the exposure of their favorite reviews at TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com absolutely free along with her associate Lois W. Stern. She also blogs at all things editing--grammar, formatting and more--at right here "The Frugal, Smart, and Tuned-In Editor" (http://TheFrugalEditor.blogspot.com) and plans to work on it harder in 2025. Her SharingwithWriters.blogspot.com blog focuses on the writing life and book marketing and promotion. It is a Writers' Digest 101 Best blogs pick.

Monday, December 9, 2024

And Just Why a Third Edition of "The Frugal Editor"






I am back from a long hiatus, so I am reintroducing my latest book in my HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers. It often surprises us writers but editing (indeed, grammar!) is not static.  There was much to do to just update the second edition of The Frugal Editor the third edition and there is much to do to convince all authors that it is not only the indie published authors among us who must know editing (and more!) that we assume our publishers will take care of.  Keep reading if you think I’ve lost my marbles! (-:

It was a huge task, I am telling subscribers and visitors to this blog now is the time to get with it. Why? Because it won’t be long before my next book will be released also from Victor Volkman's Modern History Press. 

Soooo, here's why many authors who loved the first and second edition will want to read this one--all the new stuff. It includes why the traditionally published need it too.  Oh, an see the PS: after you’ve read this.  It includes “don’t miss” #FrugalBookPromoterTips you won’t want to miss! ~ CHJ


Why a Third Edition of The Frugal Editor?

It surprises people when they learn that grammar rules change over time. Or that what they learned in high school or advanced grammar classes in college is either passé or may not apply to fiction. It also surprises them to learn that a perfectly edited book is never perfect because there are always so many disagreements among experts. And even experts are often misinformed. The worlds of grammar and style choices are filled with myths and misinformation like, “Never use contractions in your writing,” “Never use fragments,” and “Never end a sentence with a preposition.” Further, as my client base grew, I kept running into common misconceptions and outright annoying style choices that would never fly in the publishing world. Thus, a new edition of The Frugal Editor was a must! So here is what is new:

·       The Third Edition has been reorganized and my publisher tells me I outdid myself with about 50% new (helpful!) material including new “Editor’s Extras” based on my own school of hard knocks!

·       Authors will love the all-new sections including:

o    Beta readers and peer reviewers

o    What you probably don’t know about custom dictionaries

o    Up-to-date rules for accommodating gender-specific and other cultural needs

o    A chapter for word-lovers and poets

o    Quickie reviews of word processors for you

o    What even traditionally accepted front and back matter can do for your book sales, your career, and your readers

o    Political Correctness considerations change and grow with each passing day. So, yes! Lots of updating here!

·       The Third Edition of The Frugal Editor still includes the basics that make you into an on-your-own editor when you must be. Few writers other than Stephen King can afford to hire an editor for every query letter, every media release, every media kit, every blog post. So until your career is so star-studded you can afford a publicist and editor on a retainer basis, writers need to know both the basics of editing and the little-known secrets.

·       The third edition is still loaded with reader favorites like what authors need to know about book covers—but it’s updated!

·       New information will dispel myths like these:

o    Agents are a cantankerous lot. (Nope! In The Frugal Editor, twenty-one of the nation's best tell you their pet peeves and they do it in the best of spirits.)

o    If your English teacher told you something is OK, it is. (No! Language rules have changed since you were a sophomore. Anyway, your English teachers likely have no background in publishing, so apart from basic grammar, how much help can they be?

o    If a manuscript or query is grammar-perfect, you'll be fine. (No! Lots of things that are grammatically correct annoy publishers.)

o    Always use your Spell and Grammar Checker. (No! Some suggest you don't use it at all, but The Frugal Editor will help you make it your partner instead of your enemy.)

o    It's easy to avoid agent and editor scams by asking other writers. (The Frugal Editor gives you a to-do and not-to-do lists to help you avoid being taken.)

o    Your publisher will assign a top-flight editor. (Maybe, but don't count on it. The more you know, the better partner you’ll be for an editor!)

o    Formatters and editors will take care of the hyphens, ellipses, and all the other grungy little punctuation marks that English teachers avoided teaching because they didn't know how to use them either. (Chances are, you'll catch even great formatters and editors in an error or two if you know your stuff!)

 

Note: Carolyn updates links and resources and fine tunes her 
how-to books to keep them pertinent for her readers, but the updates
 of both The Frugal Book Promoter and The Frugal Editor are more 
expansive and include new covers for the purposes of branding.



PS: 
Tip#1. I copped the above assessment of what’s new from the back page of my “sell sheet.”  That’s what most call this sheet that often gets tucked into ARCs (Review Copies) for the benefit of reviewers, but it works for authors in many other ways, too.  Stay tune of the next book in the series for instruction on how to put one together in my next book, the second edition of How to Get Great Book Reviews Frugally and Ethically.
Tip#2. Amazon recently introduced a free benefit for book SERIES. Self-pubished can access it at Author Central and load every book in their series on it and start using the link to promote (and sell) the whole series in their e-book versions with a single click.  The image above is from that page and there is no charge for that either!  It just magically happens! So here’s the link for the HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers!  (Traditionally published authors will probably need to ask their publisher to do this for them! 

MORE ABOUT THE BLOGGER

 Carolyn Howard-Johnson is the author of fiction, creative nonfiction, and poetry. She is also a marketing consultant, editor, and author of the multi award-winning HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers including the award-winning second editions of The Frugal Book Promoter and The Frugal Editor. Her latest is in the series is How to Get Great Book Reviews Frugally and Ethically. Learn more on her Amazon profile page, http://bit.ly/CarolynsAmznProfile. Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers is one of her booklets--perfect for inexpensive gift giving--and The Great First Impression Book Proposal, another booklet, helps writers who want to be traditionally published. She has three FRUGAL books for retailers including one she encourages authors to read because it will help them convince retailers to host their workshops, presentations, and signings. It is A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques

Carolyn also helps writers extend the exposure of their favorite reviews at TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com. She also blogs at all things editing--grammar, formatting and more--at right here in The Frugal, Smart,and Tuned-In Editor (http://TheFrugalEditor.blogspot.com) blog. And promised to be more attentive in getting her words of wisdom (Ahem!) out to you more often. Her SharingwithWriters.blogspot.com blog focuses on the writing life and book marketing and promotion. It is a Writers' Digest 101 Best blogs pick.

Saturday, February 25, 2023

Editing and Writing Alert: Humanizing the Word “Mummy”

As someone once said in a sci-fi move, "I'm ba-a-a-ck!"  The third edition of my The Frugal Book Promoter was just released and I found a new tip for the "politically correct" section of the book, but it's too late!  It occurs to me that this is the place I should share new editing ideas and additions to the world of editing (which these days come faster than they ever have before!) with my subscribers and visitors to this blog and, of course, those who read my book in any one of its editions.  Mind you, they are all award-winners, but my publisher (Modern History Press) tells me this one has 50% new information in it, so you might want to jump on Amazon and get the new edition for yourself.  Those of you who have copies remember I always give my readers detailed indexes in my how-to books so that readers can find what they need immediately.

So, what is this new news?  You'll love it!  

NBC Reported the new research on Egypt’s  golden boy mummy and the reporting included new suggestions the writers (and many others)  interested in politically correct (more humanizing language) are have now decided to refer to mummies...yes, mummies!...should be referenced to. 
They say: 

“The new study comes as museums in the U.K. reckon with whether the term "mummy"... is appropriate to describe mummified remains because “dehumanizing” connotation  [of the word standing on its own]. 

“Where we know the name of an individual we use that, otherwise we use the term ‘mummified man, woman, boy, girl or person’ on our labels, because we are referring to people, not objects,” a spokesperson for National Museums Scotland said in an email.

“The word ‘mummy’ is not incorrect, but it is dehumanizing, whereas using the term ‘mummified person’ encourages the visitors [to our museums]  to think of the individual.” 

This report comes from Charlene Gubash reporting from Cairo and Aina J. Khan from London.

As an amateur (very amateur !) archeologist/anthropologist, I believe this is a pretty good approach to showing respect to mummified remains not withstanding what a writer's personal attitude about being politically correct is. In either case, I find this a fascinating addition to my chapter on the subject and hope that many of you check it out in The Frugal Editor, 3rd Edition, along with my brand new chapter on using back matter to better served your readers and nudge your own book sales. 


MORE ABOUT THE BLOGGER




 Carolyn Howard-Johnson is the author of fiction, creative nonfiction, and poetry. She is also a marketing consultant, editor, and author of the multi award-winning HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers including the award-winning third  editions of The Frugal Book Promoter and The Frugal Editor published by Modern History Press. Her How to Get Great Book Reviews Frugally and Ethically is also part of the series. Learn more on her Amazon Author Page,  http://bit.ly/CarolynsAmznProfile  and, if you follow her there, Amazon will notify you of new releases in the series.

 Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers is one of her booklets--perfect for inexpensive gift giving--and her The Great First Impression Book Proposal, another booklet also available in Audio, helps writers who want to be traditionally published. 

Carolyn has three FRUGAL books for retailers including one she encourages authors to read because it will help them convince retailers to host their workshops, presentations, and signings. It is A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. She helps writers extend the exposure of their favorite reviews free at TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com. She also blogs at all things editing--grammar, formatting and more-- right here and promises to do more of that in the future. ( Her SharingwithWriters.blogspot.com blog focuses on the writing life and book marketing and promotion. It is a Writers' Digest 101 Best blogs pick.

Monday, July 30, 2018

Even Accomplished Editors Can Learn from June Casagrande





Those of you who visit this blog or are subscribed to it know that I also blog at The New Book Review where this lovely review might inform (and tease!) you a bit, but because I have long been a fan of June Casagrande's sage editing advice, I wanted to share it with you here, too!  

Title: The Joy of Syntax

Subtitle: A Simple Guide to all the Grammar You Know You Should Know

Author: June Casagrande
Publisher: Ten Speed Press (July, 2018)
Paperback: $14.99
Pages: 272
ISBN-13 9780399581069
Genre: Reference/Writing/Grammar/Editing
Buy on Amazon: http://bit.ly/JoyofSyntax

NOT YOUR GRANNY'S SYNTAX BOOK

Reviewed by Marlan Warren originally posted on L.A. Now and Then blog

“If someone tells you that it's wrong to X, where X is something native English speakers do regularly, you can be pretty sure the rule is bogus.”  ~ The Joy of Syntax, June Casagrande

The first thing that popped into my head when I first began reading June Casagrande's lively, informative The Joy of Syntax: A Simple Guide to All the Grammar You Know You Should Know was me in the backseat of my parents' car circa 1960, listening to Mom and Dad engage in a heated argument over incorrect vs. correct grammar. I don't recall what "rule" they were debating, only the yelling. That's how seriously a grammar mistake can affect us.

When it comes to syntax, I suspect people may be divided into three categories: those who know what syntax is and care; those who heard about it in English class but it didn't stick; and those who do not care at all. The first group contains people who love words or need them to advance their careers, future careers, and/or social standing. Those are the people who stand to get the most out of this book.

Casagrande's style is simple, direct, and friendly-humorous. The book's contents reflect a trove of enlightening trivia such as "Well as an Adverb and an Adjective;" "Dangling Participles and Other Danglers;" "Language Myths" (brace yourself). Part I focuses on "Syntax" and Part II on "Usage and Propriety." The latter goes beyond the average English speaker/writer's grasp of what is grammatically correct and explains that the acceptability of certain words can depend on whether they have been accepted into common usage.

Did you know that if a word is found in the dictionary, it's considered "valid"? Not necessarily appropriate for your dissertation, but not "wrong" in more casual contexts.

Pop Quiz:
True or False?
(1) It is always wrong to say or write "ain't."
(2) "Nauseous" and "Nauseated" can be used interchangeably.
(3) "Tomorrow" is both a noun and an adverb.
(4) Most, if not all, grammar questions can be answered by looking in the dictionary.

Here's a hint: number one is false. Surprised? Want to know why? Read the book. As for the rest...read the book. It won't kill you and you might even learn something.


ABOUT THE REVIEWER

About the Reviewer:

Marlan Warren is an L.A. journalist, novelist, playwright, screenwriter, blogger, and publicist with Roadmap Communications and Book Publicity by Marlan. She reviews for the Midwest Book Review and her blogs include “Roadmap Girl’s Book Buzz”  and “L.A. Now and Then.” Her press releases are published in Broadway World Book News and the BBC Record. She is the author of the novel, “Roadmaps for the Sexually Challenged: All’s Not Fair in Love or War” and the producer/writer of the acclaimed documentary, “Reunion." Marlan is now in production for the documentary “What Did You Do in the War, Mama?: Kochiyama’s Crusaders based on her play “Bits of Paradise." 







ABOUT THE BLOGGER


Howard-Johnson is the author of fiction, creative nonfiction, and poetry. She is also a marketing consultant, editor, and author of the multi award-winning HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers including the award-winning second editions of The Frugal Book Promoter  and The Frugal Editor. Her latest is in the series is  How to Get Great Book Reviews Frugally and Ethically. Learn more on her Amazon profile page, http://bit.ly/CarolynsAmznProfile

Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers is one of her booklets--perfect for inexpensive gift giving--and, another booklet, The Great First Impression Book Proposal helps writers who want to be traditionally published. She has three FRUGAL books for retailers including one she encourages authors to read because it will help them convince retailers to host their workshops, presentations, and signings. It is A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. In addition to this blog, she helps writers extend the exposure of their favorite reviews at TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com. She also blogs at all things editing--grammar, formatting and more--at The Frugal, Smart, and Tuned-In Editor (http://TheFrugalEditor.blogspot.com )Her SharingwithWriters.blogspot.com blog focuses on the writing life and book marketing and promotion. It is a Writers' Digest 101 Best blogs pick.

Even Accomplished Editors Can Learn from June Casagrande